Reading books is one of the most important things we can do for our own development. When you read you get to step into other people’s lives and thoughts, and that way our ability to understand each other grows. Many young people today drop reading in favour of the phone, which I think is a shame. Research shows that them that read a lot get a bigger vocabulary and find it easier to express themselves in writing. You can see it clearly at school, where students who read often do better on the national tests. Being able to express yourself well is a skill you benefit from your whole life, whatever profession you choose. At the same time we must not forget that reading is also a source of joy and relaxation. After a long day at school a good book can be the best way to unwind.
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What makes a good life? What is important to you? The online magazine Outlook will focus
on the subject A Good Life and you are now invited to write a text for the magazine.
Write a text about what is important in life to people in general – and to yourself.
What is important to people in general in order to live a good life?What important decisions do people need to make in life?What is a good life for you personally?How can you reach your good life?How has the idea of a good life changed over time?
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The thing that is most important to people in general is love. If you don't feel loved or
give love to others, you will not feel any happiness in life. To feel important, to have a
nice job where you can make yourself a living and pay for your rent, bills and food is
also important. You have to have human rights, like being able to go to school and drink
clean water. The most simple thing as having a bed to sleep on is something that we
normally don't pay attention to. There are many important decisions that we need to do in
our lives. One of them is what we want to work with when we grow up. In the long term, the
small decisions are the ones which shape us into becoming the persons that we are today.